Thursday 12 January 2012

The Goddess is a Machine

The Goddess is a machine.
She has parts and a purpose,
Inputs and outputs.
She's self-repairing,
Self-depreciating,
Self aware.

Multiple parts, million, billions,
Organised into components.
Each with purpose and proprietary,
Separate, self-governing,
Yet contributing to a grand symphony.

We, in every sense,
Are active components.
Prone to error,
Tending to malfeasance,
But integral to the machine.

She does not forgive,
But she does subsume,
Does not replace,
When she can evolve.
And if a part wears out,
She does not mourn.
She cannot.

Object of saintly revulsion,
Subject to degradation,
No vengeful act does she countenance.
No targeted assassination
Of moneyed grabber.
But pity the poor pitman
Who strays from the path

You cannot see her,
Not on this world,
But you might glimpse her beauty
In the fox's wry glare,
Measure her majesty
In the glossy entrails
Of his latest kill,
Or catch her scent
In his leavings.

So rise from your slumber,
Step lightly on the stony path,
Leading to a lonely beach,
And watch her her rise,
Foam-dipped,
On a morning tide.

8 comments:

  1. this is interesting...the goddess..the machine...during the first stanzas i thought i had use for such a machine...then she starts to think..makes her own decisions..and the last two stanzas it takes an unexpected turn.. foam-dipped on a morning tide...great closure..

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  2. There is a huge breadth of thought in this poem. BTW, it would be great to be self-repairing?

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  3. Really like the flow and liked how she realized herself by the end, nice story telling.

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  4. I'm with Claudia, I thought perhaps this was something futuristic..and where do I get mine, and then the story's vision changed abruptly, but it worked..I like how you introduce her in the ending with a "stand back, this is big" visual..... enjoyed this very much :)

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  5. wow...what a sterile world it would seem under a goddess who cared not at the passing of those that worshipped her...very intersting piece...a thought provoker...

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  6. The intensity of your description has me seriously considering how much I am myself or indeed part of this big machine. Who's the "he".

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  7. Thanks for all your comments, they mean a lot. The 'Goddess' is a nature metaphor. Hence, nature is a machine of which we are part.

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